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Aug 29, 2002, 6:08pm

ok .. so there are prolly a mazillion storys about aw out there floating
around the net but i have started writting another one anyways.

before you click the link and go start reading it and bcoming one of my
devoted fans!! (HA .. not likely) read the disclaimer dealie below.

disclaimer:

this is a work of fiction and in no way is meant to offend or make anyone
miserable or sad. its a story for goodness sake! and it has adult
situations and sex and violence and weirdness and lots of madeup words. It
is written in the aw style of switching from third person to first person.
it is also written from the perspective of a fairy .. you know they little
bittie winged creatures that are always so sweet and helpful :)

its about half finished and i promise there is an ending, i can say this
because i have finished the ending and am writting backward from the end to
where the story currently is on my website .. that didn't sound very clear
did it?

recapping the disclaimer part:

adult situations
sex
violence
aw weirdness

oh oh oh .. and it has its own chromeless javascript browser dealie .. when
you click the link it opens a tiny popup which has the link to the story.

and stop picking on shankahlus i don't go to the gors worlds but i have
visited and i have seen his avatars and they seem ok to me .. sorta busty
but ok :)

chlorene / aura SL

http://chlorene.frag.nu

Aug 29, 2002, 7:15pm

Um, don't post this shit here...it's bad enough we have to deal with all the gor freaks in AW--don't bring that shit to the newsgroups.

[View Quote] > ok .. so there are prolly a mazillion storys about aw out there floating
> around the net but i have started writting another one anyways.
>
> before you click the link and go start reading it and bcoming one of my
> devoted fans!! (HA .. not likely) read the disclaimer dealie below.
>
> disclaimer:
>
> this is a work of fiction and in no way is meant to offend or make anyone
> miserable or sad. its a story for goodness sake! and it has adult
> situations and sex and violence and weirdness and lots of madeup words. It
> is written in the aw style of switching from third person to first person.
> it is also written from the perspective of a fairy .. you know they little
> bittie winged creatures that are always so sweet and helpful :)
>
> its about half finished and i promise there is an ending, i can say this
> because i have finished the ending and am writting backward from the end to
> where the story currently is on my website .. that didn't sound very clear
> did it?
>
> recapping the disclaimer part:
>
> adult situations
> sex
> violence
> aw weirdness
>
> oh oh oh .. and it has its own chromeless javascript browser dealie .. when
> you click the link it opens a tiny popup which has the link to the story.
>
> and stop picking on shankahlus i don't go to the gors worlds but i have
> visited and i have seen his avatars and they seem ok to me .. sorta busty
> but ok :)

Aug 29, 2002, 7:15pm

Not sure what you mean by "written in the AW style". (Didn't know AW had
a writing style) It doesn't seem like the story has much to do with AW
at all, only that it makes passing reference to certain AW things. (like
"GZ" and Gor)

Still, it seems like a nice enough story, but the writing style is a bit
unnerving. Maybe if it was told in 3rd person rather than 1st...?

Just offering some suggestions. :) (Maybe one of these days, I'll get
around to finishing *my* AW story, and we can compare notes. :P)

[View Quote] > ok .. so there are prolly a mazillion storys about aw out there floating
> around the net but i have started writting another one anyways.
>
> before you click the link and go start reading it and bcoming one of my
> devoted fans!! (HA .. not likely) read the disclaimer dealie below.
>
> disclaimer:
>
> this is a work of fiction and in no way is meant to offend or make anyone
> miserable or sad. its a story for goodness sake! and it has adult
> situations and sex and violence and weirdness and lots of madeup words. It
> is written in the aw style of switching from third person to first person.
> it is also written from the perspective of a fairy .. you know they little
> bittie winged creatures that are always so sweet and helpful :)
>
> its about half finished and i promise there is an ending, i can say this
> because i have finished the ending and am writting backward from the end to
> where the story currently is on my website .. that didn't sound very clear
> did it?
>
> recapping the disclaimer part:
>
> adult situations
> sex
> violence
> aw weirdness
>
> oh oh oh .. and it has its own chromeless javascript browser dealie .. when
> you click the link it opens a tiny popup which has the link to the story.
>
> and stop picking on shankahlus i don't go to the gors worlds but i have
> visited and i have seen his avatars and they seem ok to me .. sorta busty
> but ok :)
>
> chlorene / aura SL
>
> http://chlorene.frag.nu
>
>
>
>


--
Goober King
Add it to the To-Do list... :P
robrod at prism.net

Aug 29, 2002, 7:42pm

I actually thought that AW Tale was entertaining as a parody on AW life. If *someone* would get off his gluteus maximus and fix his damn pages... :P

[View Quote] > Just offering some suggestions. :) (Maybe one of these days, I'll get
> around to finishing *my* AW story, and we can compare notes. :P)

Aug 29, 2002, 7:44pm

its more anti-gor than gor, of course you didn't read it did you?..

although i did expect the first response to this post to be from the
resident naysayer .. thanks for the endorsement!!!

and i'm sorry iof you are so narrowminded that you construe the word
"community" to mean your private bashing ground

thanks again!!


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Aug 29, 2002, 7:46pm

first person meaning my character is in the scene in the story
third person meaning that part of the story is being narrated of observed ..

much like the views in aw .. get it?


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Aug 29, 2002, 7:51pm

I didn't read the story, but I have a suggestion for the site: have the index/story in the main window rather than a popup, because some people have popups disabled by default.

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Aug 29, 2002, 7:54pm

oh .. i didn't think about that .. ummmm try http://chlorene.frag.nu/story

Thanks!!


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Aug 29, 2002, 8:02pm

It doesn't matter whether it's gor or not! We don't need this violence and
sex bullshit in here. This ain't the gang crib of some gang-infested
american city, aight!

Aug 29, 2002, 8:04pm

you lost me on that one can you explain what you mean?



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Aug 29, 2002, 8:13pm

Can we say stereotypes? You're only taking in about... maybe 6 cities into account.
There's quite a bit more than that.

--Bowen--

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Aug 29, 2002, 8:15pm

i live in West Glacier Montana .. i guess that doesn't count right?


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Aug 29, 2002, 8:28pm

Is it a city? I'm responding to NCC's post not your own (follow the thread, sorry to
be harsh).

Not all cities fall into that awesome European stereotype.

--Bowen--

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Aug 29, 2002, 8:42pm

Erm, I guess... Mixing first person and third person writing might be an
interesting idea, but I don't think that really come across as being
representative of AW.

At any rate, when you said it was an AW story, I thought you meant it
was actually about AW. I haven't actually read the entire story yet, but
how is it based off AW? Is there more to it than just the writing style?

Oh, and Shred: My links work just fine. :P

[View Quote] > first person meaning my character is in the scene in the story
> third person meaning that part of the story is being narrated of observed ..
>
> much like the views in aw .. get it?
>
>
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--
Goober King
Maybe he should start talking in third person...
robrod at prism.net

Aug 29, 2002, 8:42pm

Well, violence and sex how he/she described it is typical gang lifestyle and
is to highly condemn. And there's no place for it here on AW. X-rating does
NOT allow violence.

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Aug 29, 2002, 8:47pm

Dude, are you drunk or something? All she said was that the story
contained some adult situations, which include some sex and violence.
She never said anything about gangs or thugs or whatever else. Perhaps
if you actually read the story, you would know that.

And X-Rated stories can have plenty of violence, but I would hardly call
her story X-rated...

[View Quote] > Well, violence and sex how he/she described it is typical gang lifestyle and
> is to highly condemn. And there's no place for it here on AW. X-rating does
> NOT allow violence.
>
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--
Goober King
Haven't we already done the sex and violence thing to death? :P
robrod at prism.net

Aug 29, 2002, 8:53pm

[View Quote] Yeah, most sex-violence stuff fits perfectly into R. Extreme sex goes into x,
pornography is an example of X rated material. She gave you a forwarning NCC, and
no, it's not just typical of "gangs." Life on earth is based around sex and violence
(excluding most plant life), not just human life. So if you have a problem, go talk
to nature.

--Bowen--

Aug 29, 2002, 8:57pm

People who like or even tolerate any violence need to go to hell, literally.

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Aug 29, 2002, 9:02pm

> People who like or even tolerate any violence need to go to hell, literally.

Well, you seem to have a VERY loose interpretation of violence. You tend to retort
back with name calling. That's very hypocritical since name calling fits into the
violence category. Emotional violence is just as bad as, if not worse, than physical
violence.

Do you watch sports? Rugby, football (soccer), and American football all contain
violence.

--Bowen--

Aug 29, 2002, 9:06pm

How is it worse that physical one? It doesn't hurt you. It doesnt damage
anything unlike physical violence. And what about name calling as defence?

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Aug 29, 2002, 9:06pm

f aura sl asked:
> you lost me on that one can you explain what you mean?

Don't bother...I don't know how many people actually understand ncc's posts
anyway...he just likes to find something to complain about and cause (havoc)
conversation.

maki awmaki.com

Aug 29, 2002, 9:06pm

Dream on, hater.


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Aug 29, 2002, 9:09pm

ncc 72897 said:
> Dream on, hater.

heh...

maki awmaki.com

Aug 29, 2002, 10:07pm

> How is it worse that physical one? It doesn't hurt you. It doesnt damage
> anything unlike physical violence. And what about name calling as defence?

Defense is still a form of violence. Emotional pain has long term affects compared
to most physical pain.

--Bowen--

Aug 29, 2002, 10:31pm

Um, why would I even bother reading it if I bashed it (which was HARDLY an endorsement, you idiot)? AW's "community" (I'm still not convinced) doesn't need to include this garbage--go to a sex story Usenet newsgroup or something.

[View Quote] > its more anti-gor than gor, of course you didn't read it did you?..
>
> although i did expect the first response to this post to be from the
> resident naysayer .. thanks for the endorsement!!!
>
> and i'm sorry iof you are so narrowminded that you construe the word
> "community" to mean your private bashing ground
>
> thanks again!!
>
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Aug 29, 2002, 10:35pm

you are very rude eep person

Aug 29, 2002, 10:40pm

Why do I get the impression that you fixed the pages after you read my post and then (seemingly) claimed that they were never broken in the first place? :P

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Aug 29, 2002, 11:21pm

Take a course in psychology and you will learn that emotional violence's consequences can be as severe or worse than physical violence.

"The pen is mightier than the sword."

Follow-up set to general.discussion

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Aug 30, 2002, 12:47am

Did I say they were never broken? ;P

[View Quote] > Why do I get the impression that you fixed the pages after you read my
> post and then (seemingly) claimed that they were never broken in the
> first place? :P
>
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--
Goober King
Don't read too much into things...
robrod at prism.net

Aug 30, 2002, 3:41am

NCC is cool if you get to know him, hes pissed off at everyone cuz you all
treat him like crap, so deal with it and stop.

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