FEB 2009 MMC - Yesterday's Tomorrow.

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Post by kena // Feb 8, 2009, 10:31am

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OK - here is the start of my WIP.


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Post by kena // Feb 8, 2009, 2:50pm

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Got fairly far with this one. I have it almost all the way enclosed. I'm sure that many of you will recognize the style.


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Post by kena // Feb 8, 2009, 6:58pm

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I THINK I'm done for the night. starting to get a bit buggy from all the modeling I've done this weekend.


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Post by Mr. 3d // Feb 8, 2009, 10:53pm

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...I THINK I'm done for the night.

Don't forget to take Astro out for a walk !!!

Post by kena // Feb 9, 2009, 5:40am

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I just KNEW someone would recgonize the style!

Post by kena // Feb 9, 2009, 6:36am

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And today's update before I go to work

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Post by kena // Feb 9, 2009, 5:32pm

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It's getting there. I hope it's looking enough like a cartoon....


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Post by marcel // Feb 10, 2009, 10:41pm

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It look like plastic toy.

There is not many people on this forum last few days. you do not feel alone?

Post by Mr. 3d // Feb 10, 2009, 11:40pm

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... I hope it's looking enough like a cartoon.

One of my many favorite cartoons growing up !!!:cool:
(Where's Judy !!!:p;))

Post by kena // Feb 11, 2009, 6:14am

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One of my many favorite cartoons growing up !!!:cool:

(Where's Judy !!!:p;))

Yep - It was one of my favorites too


It look like plastic toy.

There is not many people on this forum last few days. you do not feel alone?


Hm... I like the color, but maybe it IS too shiny... I will play around with that before putting in the smog/fog. I've also noticed a down-turn to the forums lately. I'm sure it will pick back up soon though.

Post by Georg // Feb 11, 2009, 6:26am

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Ken, I am sorry I had not recognized the style at first, but the mentioning of Astro and Judy gave it away. Looking great. So, any chance of seeing Judy appear?


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Post by spacekdet // Feb 11, 2009, 8:06am

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You aren't alone on the forum!

Have you considered using a cell shader to enhance the cartoon theme?

Post by kena // Feb 11, 2009, 4:37pm

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I tried the toon shader and it doesn't do well with straight lines. I forget. is the cell shader V-ray or Lightworks or DX9?

I've been trying to keep this one in DX9 so I can get better at different styles using it.

Post by kena // Feb 11, 2009, 6:02pm

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Maybe one of these?

I used a plain shader and a cartoon shader

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Post by kena // Feb 12, 2009, 8:05pm

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No crits or suggestions on those two?

How about this one instead?


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Post by Dragneye // Feb 12, 2009, 9:12pm

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kena, I would say the 'cartoon', basically because it has more shading. The more the better for me, but that may not be the look you're goin' for.

Post by Steinie // Feb 13, 2009, 1:51am

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I like the one labeled "Cartoon" the best because the shadowing is slightly deeper. This was a cleaver entry because it also fits the theme nicely. Are we getting a robot in this one?

Post by kena // Feb 13, 2009, 5:47am

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lol guys - If I start putting in Judy and the robot, then I would have to buy that blueprint of the Jetson's home. I'm just going for "inspired by" ;)



OK... I guess I will go by the "cartoon" shader. I still need to smooth out the bottom's of that nearest house.

Post by tahnoak // Feb 15, 2009, 12:57am

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looks great kena.. It is now 2009, weren't we all supposed to be living in houses like that by now?

Post by kena // Feb 15, 2009, 9:24pm

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Supposedly we were.


How about this for progression?


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Post by kena // Feb 18, 2009, 4:41pm

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well... SHOOOOOOOT!

Somehow I lost that scene. I had to go back to a prev incarnation and redo the clouds, ground and background.


Then I rendered it and have been waiting 10 min for it to save, but it looks like I'm going to have to end task on TS and try to recreate it.


So this is my interim update.

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Post by kena // Feb 18, 2009, 5:29pm

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Got lucky that time. The scene saved efore I had to end the process.


Here is an attempt to give it more of a 3-d look with a "little" cloud floating above the mass and obscuring a part of one of the towers.


What do you all think?


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Post by Mr. 3d // Feb 19, 2009, 3:07am

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...Then I rendered it and have been waiting 10 min for it to save

JAaaaaaaaNE !...Stop this crazy thing !!:)

It looks good Ken !!!

Post by kena // Feb 19, 2009, 5:14am

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Thanks Ed. The little cloud isnt' too much?

Post by Mr. 3d // Feb 19, 2009, 5:50am

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...The little cloud isnt' too much?

I'm not sure ? It does tend to look a little lonely. If it were me, I'd try to stretch it out a little more and maybe populate the scene with a few more (not to say that it would help... I would try it just to see what it would look like ?). I think that I'd also try and man the vehicles (considering they're at a distance, not much detail needs to go into the character ?). And also, even though all the furniture disappears into the floor and walls, I think I'd still put a little furniture in the house (dining table & chairs) along with Rosie (the robot) sweeping the floor ? Sometimes, when I think my scene is good enough, I'll end up adding some more little things here and there, and I find that I wasn't finished after all. But then again, this is your project, and I like what you have (with the vehicles parked) !!!

Post by kena // Feb 20, 2009, 5:18pm

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Does this help at all?


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Post by kena // Feb 21, 2009, 6:30am

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Huh. no comments. starting to feel left out here, so I've added my OWN people


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Post by spacekdet // Feb 21, 2009, 7:00am

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Some details would help:
rivets, panel lines, lights, furniture, floor coverings, antennae/sat dishes, ports, pipes, railings, etc. Also the glass dome seems nonexistent- there's no reflection or refraction.

Post by trueBlue // Feb 21, 2009, 7:23am

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I wonder how this would look rendered by the Flash plugin?
You can find the tSFlash.tsx in your tS folder.

Post by Breech Block // Feb 21, 2009, 8:17am

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I've never seen The Jetsons, so can't compare it to the original material. However I do like the plastic look to it alll, very retro. Like everyone else has said, a bit more detail methinks. Already, adding those few people in the cars has made a huge difference to this image. Adding more stuff will only bring it to life more. HTH.
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