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Jul 16, 2003, 10:18pm

hey everyone! well, im looking for a script writer to join the SWE-E: Proud
as a donkey (in all the same ways ;) ) studios for my cartoons to be aired
on VWTV(and flash cartoons soon). commercial at:
www.swe-e.com/vwtv/commercial (check out my kick ass guns at h1pic5.jpg
:) ). well, i need a mature writer, who is over 14 (or past puberty, which
ever comes first :) ) and most importantly, has a good sense of humor! if
your interested, e-mail me at swe at swe-e.com or tgram me in aw, citname: SWE,
or just simply reply to this post.

P.S:The first cartoon will be a funny, violant, terminator-matrix mix
(notice the black trench coat :)). its called the hubinator. Second cartoon
will also be a sorta funny-action cartoon, but dont wanna talk about it yet.
oh, and they will be more of a mini-series.

P.S.S: hubinator is based on the hubi av by ananas. thanks for the great av
ananas!!! :)

comments and suggestions about cartoon welcome.


-SWE

Jul 16, 2003, 11:20pm

Comment:

You probably won't like my comments, but here it is anyway.
I don't find anything cute or humorous in a cartoon where one character
points a gun at another character and pulls the trigger.

Question:

What age group (s) are you gearing these cartoons twords? I'm pretty sure
kids will be viewing your cartoons. Is this how you want kids to learn to
solve disagreements? I'm not saying that all kids would do this just because
of your cartoons. I'm saying that SOME kids have a problem distinguishing
between reality and non reality. SOME kids learn lifes leasons in the
weirdest places, SOME from cartoons they watch time and time again. Did you
know that there have been cases of children actually killing other children
because they watched a few to many bugs bunny and road runner cartoons and
figured it would be ok to hit little brother over the head with a hammer, or
do what ever else they saw in the cartoon that was being done? Not that they
were bad kids mind you, but because they in their little minds thought, it's
on TV so it must be ok.

Sorry to be so critical about the content of your cartoon but, I am one of
those people who wouldn't even let my own kids play with water pistols when
they were growing up. I saw no need to let them think that guns were
something fun or funny.

Anyway, I think your cartoon is cute but maybe the content could be
rethought.

Imagine

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Jul 17, 2003, 12:10am

True..

Jul 17, 2003, 10:27am

lol, i thought of that, and came to the conclusion, this is AW. how many 5
yr olds do you see roaming about? :)

"hit little brother over the head with a hammer"

*cough*anvil*cough* :)

and this is a terminator-matrix mix (trench coat frm the matrix :) ) has to
have violence, and guns. and this is only an add. plus, "Math" was gonna
delete all the tourist builds!

and, i think its the parents fault for not teaching thier kids between
cartoons, and reality. i play games with my little sister, where i would let
her beat me up, but my parents( and i :) ) have taugt her not to fight in
real life. and she doesnt (im sure of this cuz we goto the same school).

and well, cant change the contents, because it will defy the name. but ill
try to make it less violent in the actual cartoon. i give you my word to
that. this was just a quicky, so that i could start making all the graphics
i need for the full length cartoon! :)

the proper movies will also have a disclaimer, and maybe a 12a rating :)
DISCLAIMER: no hubi's were (badly) hurt in the filming of this show. All
stunts were performed by trained stunthubis, under the professional
supervision of profession supervisors. Do not attempt anything you see in
this, or anyotther cartoon, at home!

thanx for the suggestions :)

-SWE


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Jul 17, 2003, 10:30am

btw, just to let you know, making a new commercial :) need more graphics
lol.

-SWE

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Jul 17, 2003, 2:58pm

Jesus christ.. why hasn't anyone though up of freaking ratings.

Jul 17, 2003, 5:10pm

already said that in my bloody post above! >_<

12a :)

-SWE

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Jul 17, 2003, 6:34pm

Getting a Uzi and blowing somebody's brains out is the perfect way to solve
any dispute: they don't argue any more.

~John

LOL!!!!!

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Jul 17, 2003, 6:35pm

Where would a 5 yr old be likely to get an anvil?

~John

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Jul 17, 2003, 10:12pm

black smith...duhhh!! :)

-SWE

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Jul 17, 2003, 11:52pm

here we go, less violant version! www.swe-e.com/vwtv/commercial2 though, it
is missing a sixth image, which i will hopefully have finish tomorrow, gotta
goto sleep now :)

-SWE

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Jul 20, 2003, 10:40pm

www.swe-e.com/vwtv/commercial2 is complete!! :D just will need to remake the
ps2 some other time! ahh well, enjoy! :)

-SWE

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