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Nov 1, 2002, 4:12pm

While you are reading this:


Somewhere in the world a child is dying of hunger.
Somewhere in the world a mother is greiving.
Somewhere in the world an old man is dying alone in a hospital, alone, and
afraid.

Today your stomach is full.
Praise be.

Today your heart is full.
Praise be.

Today you are alive.
Praise be.

Feel.
Feel your heart.

Take a moment of your time.

Take a moment and send love and comfort
to the child that is dying.

Take a moment of your time.......

Take a moment and send love and comfort
to the mother that is grieving.


Take a moment and send love and comfort
to the old man dying alone and afraid.

Take a moment.
Take a moment of your time.


namaste; Subbmitted in Rainbow NG by bodhi

Nov 1, 2002, 5:10pm

Actually no...

> Today your stomach is full.
> Praise be.
Hardly, I havent eaten a single bite today because I didnt have time, too much work..

> Today your heart is full.
> Praise be.

Well I wouldent be reading this if it wasnt.. id be having a heart attack...

> Today you are alive.
> Praise be.

True... but that goes without saying...

> Feel.
> Feel your heart.

The poet expects me to perform a major operation on myself just to touch me?

> Take a moment of your time.
>

Yes, I have. A very nice piece, a few flaws pointed out above for me personally, but very informative while negative.

- Mark

Nov 1, 2002, 5:57pm

Come on, not all literature has to be correct. Its more important when
writing to convey the emotion of the message and get the message across.
Its nice to see threads like this every so often - don't ruin it with your
conforming to correctness stature :)

Nov 1, 2002, 8:10pm

"strike rapier" <strike at rapiercom.freeserve.co.uk> wrote in
news:3dc2df9f at server1.Activeworlds.com:

> Actually no...
> [...]

LMAO! Sorry Wiz, but Strike's interpretation of it is just hilarious ;-))

KAH

Nov 1, 2002, 8:13pm

No offence taken, just brings a thought and smile to people :-)


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Nov 1, 2002, 8:53pm

He's just being sarcastic--no need to chew him out for it.

[View Quote] >Come on, not all literature has to be correct. Its more important when writing to convey the emotion of the message and get the message across. Its nice to see threads like this every so often - don't ruin it with your conforming to correctness stature :)

Nov 5, 2002, 2:23am

Sarcasm isn't what's annoying about his post... it's the fact that he made
that post, in response to one with some "deep thoughts"....

Poseidon

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